The revamped image maybe looks more refined but also less distinct. Some of the lines are hardly perceptible. Also the anatomy somehow looks better in the old one. But worst is that spear or whatever it is supposed to be. The author literally just drew a straight thick line and let it be. There is no hint of it being an object. Just a line that seems to divide the background. She is not even really gripping it.

Sorry for being so harsh, but if anyone wants to improve, they have to eliminate basic erros first. I am not aiming to improve, so criticizing me is pointless.